Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Random Acts of Poetry...silver coin

I caught
a glimpse of God
in the open palm of
a street beggar and as the sun
glinted on my silver coin in his
hand silver-round like the head of
a nail I thought what I have
given you is the least
of what you
need



The prompt for Poetry Friday this week is to write a poem using the words "I spied God in..." I changed the prompt a bit...is that cheating, or poetic license?

More Poetry:
LL's Black Box
Laura's poem about the ocean

8 comments:

Laura said...

Oh, just loverly, Erica :)!

These moments always reveal Him to me as well. The least of these...

A Simple Country Girl said...

Your words touch my heart with such imagery and emotion. And you did it with so few words.

Looks like you and I took a similar journey with our poems.

deb said...

simple beauty to share , and receive
thank you

L.L. Barkat said...

Poetic license is always encouraged! :)

Love the coin-shape and the words.

Monica said...

Wonderful picture for me.
Thanks.
Monica

Prairie Chick said...

Mmmm... I concur with your poetic licence, now if I take this challenge I think I will want to go with your take =) Thanks for this glimpse of God.

nAncY said...

good one

sojourner said...

these words made me sad - the shape of them left an imprint in my soul